Poetry #1 - Who we are (Old stuff)

This is a little poem I made a coupla years ago... it would indeed need some rewriting, and I think I'll make it soon, but here is what it was:

Who we are...


Are we really here and there,
In this little gloomy universe?
If so, why do I still fear
The one who are so far and so near?
I can see light so right
Is coming to me so tight...
Is it once again the perfect illusion
Of another love therefore strong.
But who am I and who are they?
Does it so matter as long as we lay?
The night is mighty,
the day is shady.
Is it love real and true,
Or just another "I want you"?
If I can touch, if I can care,
If I can't breathe, if I can't dare,
The illusion of life stays right,
And love stays in its shady light.
Along with you, so near and so far,
I am still wondering who we are...



It was really deep, and has meaning that some people may not understand. Still I find it right, and true. At least at that time it was.
I'll come back soon with some new materials ;)